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26-03-2003, 19:58
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Echoed
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The use of repetition is nicely balanced out with the subsequent oppositions. And all the questioning gives a nice tone to the resignation that seems unwanted but nonetheless forced into existence. Simple and to the point without blatantly saying so. Nice. ^_^ <-- I obviously use this "emoticon" as well. Yay for anime. ^.^
~Echo.
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Quietly weaving,
Tiredly leaving,
Another today,
Again tomorrow
Together dismay,
And raining sorrow.
Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien.
Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors...
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