FadingAway, LMAO.
Trust me, a lot of it is my editor. I write in the basics and then the details where I can spare the wrist movements. LOL.
She goes through and makes it all purty! So HUGE thankies for my editor! She claims she's just "coloring in the corners" but ah well. LOL.
More thankies to
Kouketsuno Rei and
rivierakid for your feedback.