You cease to amaze me Echoed. This is a work of art that I think everyone can relate to, striking a chord deep in everyone's thoughts and psyches. The imagery is very effective and well thought out. The line "How about crimson that arteries lack? After that, there's no way back." was perfectly worded and unveils the grim truth of, for me atleast, war. Once again, a very insightful and powerful piece. Great job! Now if I can only figure a beat out for it...
