Thread: as slowly the night falls ( a poem)
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Old 29-10-2003, 08:15   #2
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niiice i liked this stanza the most:

Quote:
Everywhere is hell..
It's in your head, you are there
Rage running through their veins
As your body feels the pain
Fate written in the stars
As slowly the night falls...

good stuff, hope to read more
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