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forre

10-03-2003 00:38

A neon ball (verse)

A neon ball in someone's hands,
With colours plays but gives no sense,
Remains cold, looks so tough,
So far it isn't touched by love.

You hold it in your hands and wonder,
Why it gets power of thunder,
Of storm and fire, leaving trace,
When moving closer to your face.

You feel the ball is warm and tender,
Its light makes darkness to surrender,
The devil has no place here.
My friend, the times of truth are near.

It's gliding down the right cheek,
Then left, and you begin to freak.
Familiar voice says "It's me".
Can you believe that what you see?

Echoed

10-03-2003 00:41

I loved the imagery. ^_^ Very nice, forre.

~Echo.

O-R-!-G-I-N

10-03-2003 00:42

oh i believe what i see :p
where'd you get this from? very poetic.

forre

10-03-2003 00:47

O-R-!-G-I-N, 1994. I wrote it some 9 years ago.

O-R-!-G-I-N

10-03-2003 01:34

Jesus! *oopz* :P
erm very cool, got anythin more to give?

forre

10-03-2003 01:45

O-R-!-G-I-N, I don't know. Maybe I'll find something more in my papers as I lost the files on my HD due to its crash. Thanks anyway. Nice to recieve your compliments!

FadingAway

10-03-2003 03:54

forre, well worded! As Echoed mentioned, the imagery is very intense and well balanced. I'd love to hear more!

yuila

10-03-2003 20:36

do you like my poem? :)

WE were all boys, and three of us were friends;
And we were more than friends, it seemed to me: --
Yes, we were more than brothers then, we three. . . .
Brothers? . . . But we were boys, and there it ends.

We never half believed the stuff
They told about James Wetherell;
We always liked him well enough,
And always tried to use him well;

But now some things have come to light,
And James has vanished from our view, --
There is n't very much to write,
There is n't very much to do.

Angel_of_life

10-03-2003 22:28

forre, great! u'r writing amazingly... i like ur poems...
yuila, u t fun %) y didn't i make the new thread? and the poem... frankly speaking, i didn't understand it well... but in general not bad...

O-R-!-G-I-N

11-03-2003 01:38

lol also like your poem yuila short n simple n with rythm :done:.
(should of made a new thread like Angel_of_life said. :p.

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