Fanfic - 666
 

umm, i wrote this a while ago (not done yet), but not sure to post it. i can't find an editor for my english is not good enough to do it myself. :eek: but i think i'm gonna give it a try. anyway, here it is. any comments would be appreciated.


http://www.uhaku.com/666/666_index.htm

Hey...
 

very interesting approach you took on the story. I really liked it and hope you keep to writing. :done:

Uhaku U

Haha, change your name to that.

i don't get it.

Interesting.. definitely original. I look forward to more!

Interesting...
 

Very interesting story, I hope you continue writing :D

thanks for the feedbacks.

thank u rh2k, but tranz already offered it. thanks alot. :)

Uhaku, Vicious meant a joke... but it's pretty much ununderstandable, so don't you worry ^_^;

[color=dark-blue]Edit:[/color]Link's not working.

No! I hope you never get my ip address, Uhaku U!

Haha, oh the lower joys in life! Love 'em.

darje, still not working??? it worked on my computer.

vic, i didn't mean to scare u. j/k.

the link doesn't work for me either...i would be very happy to read you fanfic...

doh...me either

this is what i got: FORBIDDEN ADDRESS....bleh

me either

yea
 

doesn't work

try this
 

It works! Yea!

i liked it a lot!

the situations were very funny..
the whole thing with the bathroom stall and the panties and lena lying to her mom was very believable :)

good work uhaku! well done, and keep it up.. i'm eager to read what other funny situations u have ...

oh and honey don't worry, ur writing was in perfectly understandable english :)

-skrt

Yes
 

I thought is was very well wrighten. Good Job!

I hope you plan on continuing. :)

hehe
 

that was good.....i needed that laugh........very enjoyable as well!