Where Love and Need Are One
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I would say quite powerful start, so much strong feelings right at the beginning. So much hate. And love. Very promising, very promising.
And good luck for job hunting Parrish! :) |
I don't know how you do find the time to sleep! :)
I like the pace of the chapter, great writing, and like prostel said, so much entwined hate and love right there in the beginning. I read it just after waking up, that was painful (in a good way). "Yulia's jaw hit the floor" Mine too! :eek: Lena has a... OMFG! Great work, both of you! :) |
definitely a painful and powerful start. the situation is very interesting. i look forward to updates! :D
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WOW...that was great...very powerful...i can't wait to see how this evolves...because i am sure it will be awesome..with you two writers working together!
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parrish and lena410
awesome ...ur quite busy... hmmmm :ithink: :p .... :D |
oh no, lena has a kid............
WHOSE THE DADDY????? anyways, to sum this up in one word: excellent i can't wait for the next chapter! ps. is sleeping AND eating a neccesity? can't you do w/o???? j/p! lmao, j/p! :lol: good luck, i hope you find a job you like. :heh: |
Wow...Yeah, that was intense. Awesome stuff you two!
I'll definitely be waiting for more. I'm definitely curious to see where this goes. Nice first chapter! You guys rock! :done: |
kewliez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat lena had a son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wit who!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......my jaw dropped too wen i read dat bit were yul met lenas son!
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Thanks for the feedback!! *big grin* It's really appreciated.
*hugs everyone* Just wanted to say that Chapter 2 should be ready soon. *smile* well guesshoo telling you who the daddy is would spoil all the fun wouldn't it? :lol: |
god dammit...you got me........i thought there was gonna be more after that last bit you wrote in Chap two...but no......gah...you people are such meanies...
by the way excellent chapter two w00t w00t! |
Damn, that's what i call a cliffhanger! You know how to torment us! :D
Aww, she called her 'Yuli'... :) |
ummm parrish and lena, *tugs at the bottom of parrish and lena's shirt* may i have some more?
ppppplllleeeeeaaaasssseeeee???? :D :D :D ...........:bum: |
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ummmmmm:lalala: pwwwweeeeeeeessssss...parrish....more pweeeeeeessssss :lalala: |
Ready for another fanfic? DA! *gets all excited after reading the first two chaps* Love it!
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You two are doing a wonderful job.:) You're both excellent writers so I'm very happy to see that you all are collaborating.
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sorry about that parrish @$%#@%(hides) :lalala:
lena410 :rose: im so sorry....:( |
It's ok warx. *smile*
Thanks PoisonousTruth! I'm very happy that we are collaborating, too! *big grin* |
Wow! This looks very promising!! I can't believe what Lena has...definitely a shocker! Seems like Yulia and I have the same view of children so if she is *anything* like me, then I can't wait to see how she deals with this new situation. :p Looking forward to the next chapters parrish and Lena410!!
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Sooo, when can we have a new chapteeer... This Lena`s child/son thing is interesting, cos it doesn`t look like Julia is very fond of children, generally or at all.
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