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halfalien
17-12-2003, 22:05
I'm a really big t.A.T.u fan and i wrote this poem. this is the first time i write a poem, so it might not be the best, its quite short and i wrote it when i was half asleep (it sounds crazy but thats when i get all my good thoughts and idea's) Anyways.. here it is.


With all the stars up in the night,
I just want you to hold me tight,
All I want is a little love,
Just from you,
The one I love,

I just woke up in the middle of the night,
And found nothing in my sight,
Then I stared out my window,
And saw the black shadow of the night,
Then as the birds passed through the night sky,
I felt the tears falling off from my eyes,
Then I realize that you’re beyond my reach,
And I still can’t carry on with my life.

Without you to hold me tight,
I see nothing but a dark black sky,
But maybe one day I wake up at night,
And find something different about my life,
But now I go back to bed and dream off instead,
And just hope for a change in my life.




Hope you like it...

thanks for your poem, halfalien :) I think it belongs in the "Island of Arts" forum, though ... so moving it there now ... ^_^

QueenBee
17-12-2003, 22:27
Wooow.. that was really good! I like the middle part the most! Great rhyming :yes:

dare2dream28
18-12-2003, 05:30
This was *really* good. And I usually do not like poetry, but this was really good. Conveyed a lot of emotions. Great job. :)

halfalien
18-12-2003, 19:07
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halfalien
28-01-2004, 21:00
thanks..

i would also like to see other opinions