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parrish122
20-11-2003, 02:12
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guesshoo
20-11-2003, 02:15
that is so touching parrish!
i especially liked the first stanza.
the whole "not even an echo" line really got to me.
really nice!
PoisonousTruth
20-11-2003, 02:48
I really feel the entire thing, but I think my favorite is the last one. It shows defiance and the only way to go down is to go down fighting.
wow..this is so powerful parrish.. *hugs*
angeljas01
20-11-2003, 07:51
That was nice Parrish...short but it made a strong impact.
parrish122
20-11-2003, 16:58
Thanks gang.
I've always been big on going down fighting, and not giving up even when you *know* you are going to lose. I guess it shows. :)
Parrish
dare2dream28
20-11-2003, 20:26
Wow Parrish. That was really good and had a good message. I like the last two lines the best. Hope all is well with you after reading this poem! *check your PMs* ;)
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