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parrish122
24-10-2003, 14:55
Chapter one, "I Will Never Be The Same", is up!
http://parrish18.diaryland.com/older.html
Let me know what you think!
Parrish
dare2dream28
24-10-2003, 15:24
OOoooooo!!!!!! I like it!!!! A LOT!!! You had my laughing at how Yulia introduced herself and at Lena's response. *giggles* I am SO looking forward to this fic, but then again, I always look forward to your fics Parrish!! :done:
PoisonousTruth
24-10-2003, 18:13
Oh yeah! Another story. Today was not a good day for me :ill: , but now that I came on the forum and noticed this story... I'm all ecstatic.:D
One question Parrish: What is it with you and leg humping?*LOL*
samegirl
24-10-2003, 19:33
Hey as usual doc, amazing first part, lena looks so adorable (as usual, so adorable lena) I'm willing to read more
I have heard the song, and it's one of my favorites of her :)
ohhhh...parrish...another one....:D
carefull girl...i might get use to these fic of urs...
showMElove2
25-10-2003, 03:21
Another story! *literally grins from ear to ear* I am loving it already but I already knew I would!
Ooh i'm late...
Awww, Lena is such a nice girl. Not a lot of girls would accept to play Yulia's girlfriend! :D
So Yulia thinks she can have fun with Lena and not fall in love... I'm certainly interested to see how she's going to do that! I just hope Lena is not going to end up as hurt as Yulia is right now...
Thank you for giving us another great story Parrish! :rose:
prostrel
25-10-2003, 12:34
Originally posted by PoisonousTruth
One question Parrish: What is it with you and leg humping?*LOL*
Yeah, Parrish! I`m very curious to hear the answer for that too!!! :D
Interesting start, once again. :)
parrish122
25-10-2003, 14:40
Chapter two, "I Hope She Will" is up!
Oh, come on gang! I've only mentioned leg-humping twice! :D
*Walks off, trying to look innocent*
Parrish
dare2dream28
25-10-2003, 15:21
OMG OMG O_M_G!!! WOOHOOOO!!!! Yessssss!!!! Parrish, you have *no* idea how long I've waited for a story just like this!!!!! Ever since the first tatu fanfic I read, I've been waiting for a storyline *exactly* like this!!!!! OMG....I am *soooooooooooooooo* looking forward to reading all of this fic!!!! Ahhhh the anticipation!!!! *jumps up and down and squeals with delight* YAY!!!!!!!!
samegirl
25-10-2003, 16:07
WOOOOOOOWWW Parrish!!!
*shows in her cheerleader's disguise jumping all around the forum*
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
DOC
*shows again in her jeans and tennis shoes adjusting her glasses*
Well Doc, this is going to be a good good fic, i have the feeling of it, and if is you the author i couldn't expect anything more. Have I told you that i love the way you write?
PoisonousTruth
25-10-2003, 16:32
*looks at Parrish all suspicious like* :spy:
I see that "trying to look" innocent expression on your face. I think there's a story behind the leg humping.:p
Anyways.. I'll let you off the hook.. this time.*l*
Chapter 2 was cool.. now we have to wait to see how things develop.
prostrel
25-10-2003, 18:15
Still interesting. Back to the roots. Repetitio est mater studiorum. ;)
rivierakid
25-10-2003, 22:06
Heh...I like this one already! Great stuff buddy! ^_^
Ooh, you got me there Parrish! :)
Not once during the first chapter did i think we were at the original Tatu audition!
The elements were there but i didn't see! This is going to be extremely interesting! :)
Things are going to be tough for poor Lena though.
showMElove2
26-10-2003, 08:29
With this story plot and you writing it, I know that this will be another great one from you, the first two chapters have convinved me of that already!
parrish122
26-10-2003, 14:24
Chapter three, "Without Hope We Live In Desire" is up!
And why is it nobody ever believes I am innocent? :)
Haku, it's more of an "alternate universe" tatu story. Some things will be the same, but you know me.....I could go off on a whole different tangent without warning. :D
I'm glad so many of you are enjoying the fic so far. :)
Parrish
|capricious|
26-10-2003, 16:01
haha, post more parrish122, I like it :)
PoisonousTruth
26-10-2003, 16:05
I believe your innocent Parrish, well... some of the time.:)
The "moustache" part was very cute. I couldn't help but smile really big when I pictured it.:D :D
Ruivelle
26-10-2003, 20:03
wohooo !!! Very good , parrish !!! :done: Love it like always !!!
[bright blue "ink pen" moustache] :laugh:
tnx parrish
dare2dream28
26-10-2003, 22:02
LOL@the moustache!! I really am just so excited to see how this story will develop. And Parrish, considering the stories you've told me about some of your friends, I have an odd feeling that the leg humping thing has a real life story behind it. LOL
it's more of an "alternate universe" tatu story.
Fine by me, i like alternate universes! :D
prostrel
27-10-2003, 06:38
Originally posted by haku
Fine by me, i like alternate universes! :D
Haku took words out of my mouth. :done:
parrish122
27-10-2003, 15:58
Chapter four, "Growing Closer" is up.
I'm glad you all liked the "moustache".:D
Parrish
PoisonousTruth
27-10-2003, 18:08
Go Lena, Go Lena.. *"raises the roof"*
Maybe next time Lena can get all "matrix" on her ass.:dead:
Don't ask.*l* I just had a picture of Lena dressed up in leather like Trinity from the Matrix and well....
Great job Parrish.
dare2dream28
27-10-2003, 18:55
To Lena: YOU GO GIRL!!!!! The smurf comment made me laugh out loud. :D:D Great job Parrish!!! And I like how you added how Lena felt about the simple act of holding her hand. Great stuff. :done:
Originally posted by PoisonousTruth
Go Lena, Go Lena.. *"raises the roof"*
Maybe next time Lena can get all "matrix" on her ass.:dead:
Don't ask.*l* I just had a picture of Lena dressed up in leather like Trinity from the Matrix and well....
Great job Parrish.
mmm, lena in matrix leather....
very nice mental image there, PT! :D
and Parrish! awesome chapter - i loved the detail about mia being all triumphant until lena tosses the drink in her face...classic!
amikana :D
Originally posted by PoisonousTruth
One question Parrish: What is it with you and leg humping?*LOL*
:lol: you have to tell me what the deal with you and leg humping is *shakes head laughing* you *really* use it often
and you and innocent? :lol: we had that..*rofl*
anyway...I know Im late...*glares at dial up in bratislava*
Great story!! I love it!! *jumps up and down in anticipation*
I was going to say something and i read that...
Lena dressed up in leather
:dead: <--- haku
guesshoo
28-10-2003, 02:04
damn!
am i late, or am i late?
i like the part when lena tells mia "fuck you".
its amazing how powerful those 2 words are, i love it!
anyways, nice fic so far p. diddy.
very promising!
so Parrish hasn't posted that chapter five is up yet....
but i just read it! ;) it's phenomenal! Parrish, it's so incredibly sweet!! great job!
amikana
parrish122
28-10-2003, 15:17
*laughs* Every now and then, one of you manages to read my new chapter before I can post that it's up!
Thanks Amikana. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Chapter five is titled, "Do You Know What It Means To Love" btw. And the poem included is one of mine.
Parrish
ooh, so you wrote that poem, eh? i thought maybe you had since there wasn't an author's note. it's very very good!
and yeah - liked the chapter very very very much! :)
amikana
great poem in there parrish..*smile* and great chapter...loved it..lena is just soo cute *g*
Aww Lena is so adorable, great chapter Parrish. :)
It just occured to me (i'm slow) that in this Tatu universe they are much older at the time of the audition than in our universe. Those two won't be accused of being underage.
PoisonousTruth
28-10-2003, 18:33
I really felt that poem.*nods*
I hope that Lena finds the courage to express how she really feels.
prostrel
28-10-2003, 18:56
I love your poem Parrish.
samegirl
28-10-2003, 19:39
It's an amazing chapter doc!
And the poem..i loved it!
Lena here is just adorable...and caring...it'ss so good to be in love :d
poor lena :(
i wonder wats wrong with mia...y she hates yulia that much :ithink:
tnx for the update parrish:D
showMElove2
28-10-2003, 22:49
Wow that poem really conveyed Yulia's feelings...Nice!
guesshoo
29-10-2003, 01:35
mia is such a bitch!
i don't know about you guys but i think she needs to be taught a lesson.
anyways, i wish lena "the best of courage" (does that even make any sense? :ithink: ) on expressing her feelings, b/c i think she can really do yuli some good.
nice poem p. diddy and keep those chapter flowin!
rivierakid
29-10-2003, 02:35
Heh...Mia looked like a smurf...I could *totally* picture that...And let me tell you, it's an *incredibly* amusing picture. :lol:
As usual, awesome stuff. Glad the two of them are getting to know each other much better. You rock, man. ^_^
happy777
31-10-2003, 15:36
waiting for the next chapter>>>you're awesome
please update soon
parrish122
31-10-2003, 16:00
Chapter six, "I Promise To Never Love You" is up!
And thanks for letting me know how you liked the poem in the last chapter. It had been a while since I'd written one, and I wondered if I had gotten rusty. :)
Parrish
dare2dream28
31-10-2003, 16:10
Okay, all together now and "Awwwwwwwwww!!!!" :D They are just too cute!! Lovin' this story Parrish!!! :done:
happy777
31-10-2003, 16:31
:done: :done: love this story:done: :done:
parrish:done: good job
"Awwwwwwwwww!!!!" :yes:
Simply adorable! Such a sweet chapter Parrish! :)
prostrel
31-10-2003, 17:45
Thank you Parrish! This was really sweet, cute and pink-coloured chapter. :)
they're adorable! :D
amikana
PoisonousTruth
31-10-2003, 19:06
I agree with amikana. They are adorable.:)
I'm slightly worried though about Lena.:(
samegirl
31-10-2003, 19:28
Originally posted by PoisonousTruth
I agree with amikana. They are adorable.:)
I'm slightly worried though about Lena.:(
Me too :(
But this was a very tender chpater, it made me smile at the same time that my heart was shrinking...
Originally posted by PoisonousTruth
I'm slightly worried though about Lena.:( [/B]
i have to agree with you here PT - i think there's gonna be some hurting going on before the end of this....
but this is only the beginning so it's to be expected! no matter what though, this fic *rocks*
amikana :D
parrish122
01-11-2003, 14:22
Chapter seven, "The Ruling Passion" is up.
You people are making me blush! :) I'm glad you are all enjoying it so. I know I say that every time, but I really *does* mean a lot to me that all of you care enough about my writing to let me know how you feel. Sometimes when I'm feeling down and thinking I'm a fool to even dream of being a writer, I'll go through some of these old posts and read them. It always makes me feel much better.
So, as always, thank you.
Parrish
i *love* the last line - the bit about her arms getting shorter. very nice! great work Parrish!
amikana :D
prostrel
01-11-2003, 15:16
[QUOTE]Originally posted by amikana
i *love* the last line - the bit about her arms getting shorter.
[B]Amikana , I was just about to say that too :)
Thanks Parrish. That birthday party will be interesting (N+V)!
That Mia is a bitch! :mad:
Poor Lena, convincing Yulia that it's safe to love again is going to be very difficult. :(
nice parrish...hmmm...parents...:ithink:
parents should be supportve...but wen it comes to sexuallity of their childrn they transform into monsters...:p
guesshoo
02-11-2003, 00:13
poor yuli............
i hope she lets lenny help her.
as always p.diddy, very well written.
keep it up!
showMElove2
02-11-2003, 08:37
I see I was not the only one who found that last line "pure genious"... Another great chapter:done:
parrish122
02-11-2003, 15:02
Chapter eight, "Nerves and Beauty" is up!
I'm glad you all liked that last line in chapter seven. :)
Parrish
Again a very sweet chapter Parrish. Lena is so adorable! How could anyone *not* fall in love with her? :)
Poor Yulia seems so afraid to let herself love again though!
And silly me! I had been picturing Yulia with her usual spiky dark hair! *smacks forehead* She was of course blond back then! :D
samegirl
02-11-2003, 16:16
Wow Doc! what a nice chapter! i agree with haku, lena is almost perfect here, anyoune could fall in love with her...and about yulia...well she loves lena already but she doesn't accept it but with time and parrish's talen she will be...i mean it's lena...the georgeous, cutest, sweetest girl in the world!
*sigh* I want a lena for me...
i fall more in love with them both with every chapter! ;) :)
awesome chapter Parrish, simply awesome!
amikana
nice flow parrish.....:p
cnt wait for more girl....:D
Veggie Delite
03-11-2003, 06:03
just one word: GREAT
i hate to beat you to it again parrish....
but i'll just say that the next chapter was sweet and somehow incredibley sad. i just want to wrap 'em up in a huge hug. :)
great work though, really. i'm really feeling this fic.
amikana :D
parrish122
03-11-2003, 15:37
*laughs* It looks like you know my schedule pretty well, Amikana! I'm glad you are enjoying this fic so much.
Chapter nine, "You Don't Know Me" is up!
Parrish
Great chapter Parrish!
I agree with amikana, this chapter is such an emotional mix. Happiness to see that the connection between the two of them is deepening, but the image of the two of them ending up alone hugging pillows is so sad. *wipes a tear* That's a beautiful image though Parrish, in a sad way, i liked it. :)
That Lena is just remarkable.
PoisonousTruth
03-11-2003, 16:44
I agree with the others, it was an emotional mix.. I got all happy then all sad. I'm going to keep my fingers crossed for both pairs of love birds.
Originally posted by parrish122
*laughs* It looks like you know my schedule pretty well, Amikana! I'm glad you are enjoying this fic so much.
Chapter nine, "You Don't Know Me" is up!
Parrish
lol, i've just gotten lucky i think. 'cause i was on my way to class but i checked it real quick anyway and there it was! i was so stoked :D
amikana
happy777
03-11-2003, 18:48
really sweet>>
prostrel
03-11-2003, 20:46
I loved this chapter Parrish! It is so delicate situation between Lena and Julia. We have to move on tiptoe. :)
tnx fot the update parrish....:p
its awesome, as usual...:D
guesshoo
04-11-2003, 02:02
wow, so nik and victor hit it off huh?
awesome.
i just hope it goes the same way for volk and lena.
parrish122
04-11-2003, 15:15
Chapter ten, "The Rose" is up!
Parrish
PoisonousTruth
04-11-2003, 15:50
Originally posted by guesshoo
wow, so nik and victor hit it off huh?
awesome.
i just hope it goes the same way for volk and lena.
I hope it does too.. Maybe something will happen this weekend they have.
wow. serves mia right....although i was very much afraid at first. 'cause the first thought that came to mind was "oh no...yulia's gonna go back to mia.....show up and lena's...oh no poor lena!!"
lmao, thank you *so* much for proving me wrong here Parrish!
amikana :D
dare2dream28
04-11-2003, 17:56
Originally posted by amikana
wow. serves mia right....although i was very much afraid at first. 'cause the first thought that came to mind was "oh no...yulia's gonna go back to mia.....show up and lena's...oh no poor lena!!"
lmao, thank you *so* much for proving me wrong here Parrish!
amikana :D
I know!!! I was thinking that too! I was like "Yuullliiiaaa, don't be foolish!!" I was glad to be proven wrong. :D Ooo now to see if Lena still goes through with her plan! Thanks for the updates Parrish!!! :D
showMElove2
04-11-2003, 19:26
Im so glad Yulia go that oer with, she needed to do that. Now she can go to Lena without that deadweight still on her mind! Good Luck Lena!
samegirl
04-11-2003, 19:43
God parrish! you terrified me when i was reading the chapter! it made me nervous as you don't have idea...Thank God yulia realized what she had to do and how she defended lena! all we have to do now is for the next chapter at lena's apartment
Maybe it's no good idea for lena to tell her how she feels in this moment don't you think?
Nevermind, you know what you're doing, you're the fic master after all...:rose:
prostrel
04-11-2003, 21:37
Thrilling chapter Parrish! But what is it with angry people, why do they always have to destroy poor, beautiful roses? :(
OH!!! she hit mia....:eek:
guesshoo
05-11-2003, 03:22
yo, i straight up thought yuli was gonna fall for her again son!
i was like "oh shiznit!"
but i'm glad she didn't play herself yo.
tight chaps. you got thur p. dizzle.
word up.
angeljas01
05-11-2003, 06:17
Great chapter Parrish! I was afraid Yulia was gonna go back to Mia...can't wait for the next chapter hopefully everything will go smoothly.
I'm so late on this. Never go away, even for half a day.
Well, i was like everyone else, afraid that Yulia might go back to Mia. My heart certainly beat faster during that chapter, i read it very fast to know what would happened!
So Mia rejected Yulia because she thought being gay would damage her carrier when in fact she was auditioning for a band involving being lesbian lovers! Oh the irony! :)
She could have Yulia and a job now if she had let herself be what she really is. But of course i'm glad she didn't, it's obvious she doesn't really love Yulia. Lena is the true love for Yulia! :)
Ooh and i'm glad Yulia hit her when she insulted Lena!
parrish122
05-11-2003, 15:23
Chapter eleven, "I Will Survive" is up!
I'd wondered how many of you would be afraid that Yulia would go back to Mia. :) Interestingly enough, I'd planned on Yulia's talk with Mia to be shorter, but soon found that Yulia had a *lot* more to say to her.
And I was cheering her on the whole time. :)
Parrish
OMG Parrish! I almost got a heart attack! *checks his pulse* Still alive!
I won't say anything more because that would ruin it for the other readers, but i was nearing tears at the end!
Ooh and hail Gloria Ganor! :D
angeljas01
05-11-2003, 17:56
At first I was like ohhhh... and then I was like AHHH!!!!!....and finally I was like awww... Great chapter Parrish!
first of all - 'i will survive' is one of the greatest songs *ever*...and completely perfect for this chapter. :)
and second - i totally did not see that coming. well i just didn't see it happening the way that it did. i liked it a lot though. great work Parrish! :) :)
amikana :D
samegirl
05-11-2003, 19:56
OMG!!! What a chapter! you almost...made me cry again! and ohh i will survive! what a song! one of the best songs ever. Great and mazing job parrish!
showMElove2
05-11-2003, 20:19
*Joins the others in praising "I Will survive"* the chapter and the song! Good one!
is it just me or this fic realy RULEZ!!!
question guys:
y is it that scene's like this(i mean the last part) r so damn sweet....just like parrish's previous fic(yulia and rain), the scene wer yulia almost drown, she was saved by rain......
tnx for the update parrish:D
dare2dream28
06-11-2003, 00:43
Ahhhh!!! For a second there I thought that Parrish was going to torture us with a cliffhanger and I was like "NOOOOO!!!!!!" then I read a little further and was like "Whew! Thank goodness!" then I did a big sappy "Awwwwwwwww!" :D:D And I agree that putting "I Will Survive" was awesome!
guesshoo
06-11-2003, 04:08
when i read the rain falling bit i had a feeling that something was gonna take place.
but wow.............
anyways, the song used was compeletely relevant and it played an important part in understanding yulia's emotional state. a very good idea.
good work p.diddy.
parrish122
06-11-2003, 15:29
Chapter twelve, "I Have You" is up!
I'm *really glad you all liked that last chapter. :) I'd wondered if I'd give any heart attacks with that one. And actually, I *had* planned on ending the chapter with where Lena sees Yulia's car and runs out of the apartment while calling Nik.
But then I decided that was just *too* cruel. :)
Parrish
Awwwww such a cute chapter Parrish! :)
I was just smiling all along! And of course i grinned when Lena lifted up her shirt! Like that ---> :D Lena is such a sweet girl!
No one ever did that for me when i got a bandage removed. :none:
hehe cute chapter parrish!
amikana :)
angeljas01
06-11-2003, 17:39
That was a really cute chapter and Lena lifting her shirt was the best part. thanks Parrish!
PoisonousTruth
06-11-2003, 21:09
Yep, I had to smile at the lifting the shirt part.:)
The whole chapter was very cute indeed.
showMElove2
06-11-2003, 23:14
Sweetness!
guesshoo
07-11-2003, 00:23
awwww, thats so sweet!
i love it!
thanx p. diddy.
happy777
07-11-2003, 17:24
Urrr!!!parrish
How about this one for today??? keep waiting ;)
parrish122
08-11-2003, 01:35
*laughs* Sorry gang. I was so tired from all the writing I did for the other fic, that I didn't work on this one last night. Plus I just didn't have time to.
But I won't abandon this story. Honest. :)
Parrish
it's alright yo - we'll forgive you ;) :)
but only 'cause noth stories are just *so* great. :D
amikana
happy777
08-11-2003, 07:45
it's ok parrish>>>it's worth to wait
parrish122
11-11-2003, 23:22
I *swear* I didn't forget about this story!
My boss had a brief moment of kindness and gave me four days off in a row, so I took a bit of a vacation from *everything*. Yes, I love writing, but I needed a break from even that.
Here is something funny. Barb went by my job to pick up a few things. She saw my boss, and thanked her for giving me my days off. My boss said, "I could tell she needed them. I was afraid that she'd beat the hell out of one of the customers if I didn't give her some time off. And she's earned it anyway." LOL! I had no idea that my being stressed out was so obvious. :)
Anyhow, if I get a chance to, I will do some writing tonight. Probably on this fic, since it's the one I updated last.
Parrish
PoisonousTruth
12-11-2003, 05:29
Take your time. You've been doing a lot of writing lately.
Veggie Delite
12-11-2003, 13:56
we can wait :rose:
parrish122
12-11-2003, 15:10
Chapter 13, "But I Lied" is up!
And gang? Thanks for understanding, and for all the support you've given me with my writing. It means a hell of a lot to me.
Parrish
What a beautiful chapter Parrish. What Yulia wrote is so moving, and the last scene between Y&L is so sweet. Just beautiful. :)
"it will be perfect because it will be with you"
awwwwwwwwwwww :):) so cute!
amikana
ok...that's so sweet....:D
nice chap parrish....:p
rivierakid
13-11-2003, 02:04
My God...I almost died from a sugar overdose just reading that! I love it! :D Great stuff, buddy!
samegirl
13-11-2003, 02:19
Maybe i haven't told you, but the wait was worth...you did an amazing job in this chapter, very sweet, full of love, amazing like always doc!
"It will be perfect." Lena said. "Because it will be with you."
That line made me fall in pieces...
guesshoo
13-11-2003, 03:51
awwww, that is so sweet!
they are the cutest!
good work p. diddy!
showMElove2
13-11-2003, 09:44
Originally posted by rivierakid
My God...I almost died from a sugar overdose just reading that! I love it! :D Great stuff, buddy!
yeah, I got a sweet tooth from that one myself:done:
Well worth the wait and I loved the words that yul wrote, always fitting for the moment; you have a way with that.
Veggie Delite
13-11-2003, 20:04
this chapter was so awwww... :)
*melts*
parrish122
14-11-2003, 15:02
Chapter 14, "Every Loving Touch" is up!
Thanks gang. For all the sweet things you said about the last chapter. :)
Parrish
"be sure to pay attention"
bwahahahaha!!! that's awesome Parrish!
great chapter :)
amikana
guesshoo
15-11-2003, 01:26
awww, yuli is so gentle when it comes to lena!
that is the sweetest thing!
nice work p. diddy!
Well, what can i say about such a chapter... *blushes* Lena is sure eager to learn! :D Who wouldn't with Yulia?
showMElove2
15-11-2003, 09:49
Lena being all nervous, that was too cute and Yulia's assurance that she won't hurt her...awwww, Perfect!:done:
parrish122
15-11-2003, 15:02
Chapter 15, "Why Don't My Scars Show?", is up!
Parrish
Great chapter Parrish. :)
The first part is hillarious. Very deep inside? LOL
And LOL @ the fact that Ivan doesn't understand their jokes!
The text you included is beautiful. :)
I have a bad feeling about that other project Ivan talked about. Could it be... No, it can't... Yes it could... :none: Poor Yulia.
dare2dream28
15-11-2003, 16:06
LOL@the *very* deep inside jokes!! haku, I didn't even think of that possibility when Ivan said that about the new singer! Argh she just better back the heck off and leave them alone!!! Great update as usual Parrish. :D
heh those jokes *rock* :D
awesome chapter Parrish
amikana :)
guesshoo
15-11-2003, 21:02
i have a strong feeling of the new project might be but i'm gonna stay positive and hope for the best.
for yuli and lena's sake.
thanx parrish.
Veggie Delite
16-11-2003, 01:40
this really cheared me up, after a very sad day :rose:
PoisonousTruth
16-11-2003, 04:34
I think a lot of us are concerned about this 'new project' Ivan is cooking up so you know what that means... don't leave us hanging too long.;)
parrish122
16-11-2003, 16:05
Chapter sixteen, "Agreeing To Stay", is up!
Parrish
Sweet chapter Parrish. :)
Y&L are sure spending a lot of time in bed. :D
I like the line about Yulia liking the cheering while she kisses her girlfriend. A hint to what's to come. :)
Veggie Delite
16-11-2003, 22:01
this was an extra sweet chapter :)
guesshoo
17-11-2003, 04:05
that is soooo sweet!
looks like yuli and lena have a promising future!
thanx p. diddy.
samegirl
17-11-2003, 04:29
they are so cute!
I don't know how you do it doc, but you always manage them to make them the sweetest and cutest couple ever, they are so into each other, not only physically, they are only one. they are truly devoted to each other, it's like one brings the best of the other and makes her stronger
It makes me feel so good! love can be sooo good!
*love* the new chapter Parrish! those girls definitely know how to spend an hour :)
amikana
showMElove2
17-11-2003, 15:12
Hey, just caught up on the last few chapters and I know Im late but those quacks about the pupli and the teacher had me LMAO! The last chapter was just as sweet as well but I fear trouble is brewing in the form of Ivan's new talent....
parrish122
17-11-2003, 15:14
Chapter 17, "Being Watched", is up!
Parrish
samegirl
17-11-2003, 15:41
mia--->stalker? o.o interesting...
but Mia, is the new project right?
so... weird...:ithink:
Oops Parrish, you posted a chapter from "The Chosen" along with this chapter. ;)
It's nice to see them so happy, but yes, Mia is gonna cause trouble. And if she's indeed the new project, it's going to be hard for Yulia to hear her sing a text she wrote.
PoisonousTruth
17-11-2003, 16:31
Yay! They are all over the radio. That's wonderful.
I can't believe that her being the new project didn't hit me until I read some of your all's posts. Oh.. that's not good.*shakes head*
parrish122
17-11-2003, 16:31
Yeah, I saw that Haku. *Laughs* I'm too tired to be doing all this posting. But it's fixed now.
Parrish
dare2dream28
17-11-2003, 19:28
Originally posted by PoisonousTruth
Yay! They are all over the radio. That's wonderful.
I can't believe that her being the new project didn't hit me until I read some of your all's posts. Oh.. that's not good.*shakes head*
Don't feel bad, I didn't get it either. :D This will be quite a trying time for Yulia though, and Lena since I'm sure Lena will just want to kick Mia's butt if Mia sets foot anywhere near Yulia. *thinks* Hmmm, that would be fun to see!! :p
Veggie Delite
18-11-2003, 15:36
ok, now i'm worried :ithink:
parrish122
18-11-2003, 15:47
Chapter 18, "My Girl", is up!
Parrish
i'm sensing an evil plot here.....
cute chapter anyway though :)
amikana
This is a sweet chapter as far as Y&L are concerned, for the rest, all i have to say is go Lena! Go kick some asses!
dare2dream28
18-11-2003, 19:03
I second haku's post!!!! Lena should go and kick Mia's ass!!! And Ivan..grrrrrrr...I thought that for once I would actually like Ivan's character in a fic but nooooo he just had to go and be a jerk and betray Yulia like that!!! :bebebe:
mia mia mia....
wat r ur intentions my dear...:ithink:
anywayz...tnx for this chap parrish:D
showMElove2
19-11-2003, 14:55
I knew there would be trouble but I think Lena will handle it!
Great updates, thanx!
guesshoo
20-11-2003, 01:47
ooooooooh, van-ya's in trou-ble!
kick his ass lena, he deserves it!
bastard!
he even made yuli cry.
thanx p. diddy.
PoisonousTruth
20-11-2003, 02:43
Lena's gonna kick some asssss, Lena's gonna kick some assssss.. *l* I don't know that for sure although I am sure that she'd do anything to take care of 'her girl'.
parrish122
21-11-2003, 15:43
Chapter 19, "The Meeting", Is up!
Parrish
dare2dream28
21-11-2003, 16:25
OMFG!!! No F'ing way that bastard Ivan did that!!!!! OMG Lena is so going to kick his ass!!!!!!! Kudos to Lena for dumping that hot coffee on him! She's a fiesty one, isn't she? :D But MAN oh MAN that is cruel what Ivan did. Just absolutely CRUEL. And I was laughing and clapping with Lena said "We might be stuck with you for two years, but remember that if we choose we can make your life hell!" I was like YOU GO GIRL!!! You tell him!!!!! *wonderful* update Parrish!! :done:
PoisonousTruth
21-11-2003, 17:15
I'm so mad at Ivan right now I could blow a fuse. That little sneaky bastard.
I like how Lena think. Kicking his ass? She should actually kick something else. :D
Originally posted by PoisonousTruth
That little sneaky bastard.
fucking *manipulative* bastard.
[does a cheer for lena] it's so adorable that she's being all protective of yulia :)
amikana
guesshoo
22-11-2003, 17:06
ooooooh vanya makes me sick!
what the hell was he thinking?
idiot
thanx p. diddy.
parrish122
27-11-2003, 16:38
Chapter 20, "Surprise Shower", is up!
I think you'll like this one. :D
Parrish
PoisonousTruth
27-11-2003, 19:35
:eek: Now I have a mental picture of .. .. *LOL* Well, after you all read the chapter you'll know what I'm talking about.
That's not exactly the kind of image i like to have in my mind but... oh well, that was funny. :D Reminds me of a cartoon, can't remember the name though...
Ok, i need something else to think about now... LOL
showMElove2
28-11-2003, 03:43
I think they both got a *surprise* funny cause I couldn't get that image out of my head........ okay its gone
parrish122
04-12-2003, 15:16
Chapter 21, "Turning The Moment" is up!
Parrish
awwww - way to go yulia! and i love that bit at the end... :)
great work parrish :)
amikana
PoisonousTruth
04-12-2003, 16:26
That was so sweet how Yulia made Lena laugh. I'm not too sure how I would have handled that situation. I probably would have been eye ballin' that water too.
Veggie Delite
04-12-2003, 20:02
this was so sweet and funny at the same time :)
That Lena has a bit of a temper! :)
Women's prisons... *cough* that brings a few images in my mind... :lalala: :D
guesshoo
05-12-2003, 03:18
"She leaned over to Lena again and whispered, "She wants us locked up with nothing but women? And we'd have to all shower together? And everyone would wear uniforms? Oh, stop her Lena! She's making me wet!"
now that is what i call funny!
good work p. diddy!
parrish122
15-12-2003, 16:43
Chapter 22, "Always Real" is up! It is also the last chapter for this fic.
Parrish
Wow, this final chapter is *so* connected to how i've been feeling those past days, that's incredible. That was emotional to read. I won't say more because i don't want to give any hints to other readers.
Thank you so much Parrish for such a great story. :rose: I *really* enjoyed reading it. :)
I'm sad to leave those characters though, much more than i would have been a few days ago.
PoisonousTruth
15-12-2003, 21:12
That was a perfect ending Parrish.:rose:
showMElove2
15-12-2003, 22:14
Loved the ending! Thanks for another wonderful story! T
nice...nice... nice....:done:
so it ends:(
though i knw u make another one...hehehehe :lalala:
rivierakid
16-12-2003, 02:41
Awesome. Just plain awesome. How do you do that, man? Everything you write is awesome. It's gotten to the point where it's almost pointless to say it. :rolleyes:
But I'll say it anyway, cuz I know you love hearing it. :D Again, well done. And, of course, YOU ROCK!!! :done:
dare2dream28
16-12-2003, 03:51
Wow! What an ending! Your author's note said *so* much of what I was feeling and that last chapter just...wow, I can't even explain how much I connected to that. That was a perfect ending Parrish, absolutely perfect. Another fic well done! :done:
angeljas01
16-12-2003, 06:35
Thanks Parrish, that was a nice ending, the chapter was very thoughtful...and as always thanks for the authors note. :)
Veggie Delite
16-12-2003, 12:44
such a nice ending. :rose:
i just adore u'r author's notes :)
parrish122
16-12-2003, 14:48
Wow! Thanks gang!
I had hated leaving this fic untended to for so long...but I knew I wanted the ending to be right.
Now it seems like there was a reason for me to hold off on the ending for so long. :)
I had hoped that with this ending, there would be something that *everyone* could connect to, no matter how they felt about recent events. From the reactions I've heard, I managed to pull it off.
You have no idea how happy that makes me.
I *am* surprised that nobody has mentioned the lime jello yet though. :D
Parrish
dare2dream28
16-12-2003, 16:53
Originally posted by parrish122
I *am* surprised that nobody has mentioned the lime jello yet though. :D
LOL! That was a good one. I think the best was when she threw the "ink pen" in Mia's face. I could *so* imagine her looking like a smurf!! LOL Lena cracked me up in this story and I'm so glad things turned out the way they did. Although it would have been funny as hell if Ivan were to jump in his pool without realizing what was in it first. Oh mannnn I would pay to see that! LOL
parrish122
16-12-2003, 17:08
*snort*
I wonder if Ivan *did* do that, would he bounce out of the pool?
*laughs at image*
Parrish
guesshoo
17-12-2003, 03:25
once again nice work parrish!
although its sad to see such an awesome fic come to an end, we all knew that it would have to happen anyway.
thanx once again p. diddy. :)
Originally posted by parrish122
I wonder if Ivan *did* do that, would he bounce out of the pool?
Ok, i have to admit that i didn't really know what lime jello was :lalala: cultural gap i suppose.
I didn't know why it was funny to put that in a pool, but from that quote i understand now.
*belated laugh* :lalala:
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