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Kappa
09-10-2003, 00:08
One wonders of the times in which you felt at peace, and why. Why that one thing that brought you so much happiness, is also that one that brings you so much pain.
And yet I wonder of those times in which you used to be half my life and the other half I exchanged for you is still struggling to come back.
And still I wonder why did I have to love you of all people.

My tears have your name imbedded.

ifearlovingagaini'llbehurtagainiwon'tstanditagain

To know I loved you and lost you, is more painful than the knife still stuck to my throat.
guesshoo
09-10-2003, 01:13
i absolutely love this!
i'm feeling the pain and hurt in your words.

it sorta relates to what i am currently going through w/ my best friend....... long story.


a job well done darje.
Lena410
09-10-2003, 05:54
wow..very intense..very good done! It's so thick with emotions..I'm still speechless..

*hugs* I hope you are ok.
Kappa
09-10-2003, 06:05
Yeah. Thick with emotions is what I am. Thanks.
rivierakid
09-10-2003, 06:51
Yes...Very intense...Great stuff, man.

*another big hug* Still love ya, bro.
warx
09-10-2003, 09:31
damn gril...u really hurt.......:(
Kappa
09-10-2003, 10:09
Yeah, warx, but don't we all sometime?

Thanks for your kind replies. :) Incredible what five lines can say, eh?

I guess I'm left with more time to write. :)
taty994945
09-10-2003, 12:17
very honest darje
QueenBee
09-10-2003, 17:06
darje, WOW.. WOWWWW is all I have to say.. I absolutely love your writing!! Did you use to write before or something? Because that is truly.. WHOA. I hope you have soem more poems so that you can post them and show to us!
amikana
09-10-2003, 20:29
very intense. :)

my fav line: My tears have your name imbedded.
very very awesome work darje! :D
nath
15-10-2003, 22:48
sincere and sensitive