are these lyrics good enough for a song?

[_SiLeNt_iNdri]

You’re my vision of love
The very heart of life
The last word

You made me dream again
To dream again
Took me where I’d never been
You made me dream again

Don’t let me fall apart
Please don’t break my heart
I love you

Your kisses I would miss
Your smile and your caress
I love you

Summers roll and winters too
Yet my feelings for you stay true

Now I’m helpless as you
Just drift away from me
I miss you

You made me dream again
To dream again
You took me where I’d never been
You made me dream again

Don’t let me fall apart
Please don’t break my heart
I love you

Your kisses I would miss
Your smile and your caress
I love you
Summers roll and winters too
Yet my feelings for you stay true

You made me dream again

Don’t let me fall apart
Please don’t break my heart
I love you.

Your kisses I would miss
Your smile and your caress
I love you

Summers roll and winters too
Yet my feelings for you stay true

Don’t let fall apart I love you baby
Your kisses i will miss
Your smile and your caress
I love you

Summers roll and winters too
Yet my feelings for you stay true

You make me, you make me dream!

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Your lyrics are so touching and heart felt! WOW, can I ask you who inpsired you to write this song?? Amazing work really!! DO you write or sing or both?? I am working on a song right now actually...It's called Running...But again,great work!! BYE!

[_SiLeNt_iNdri]

Thank you very much for your comments. My auntie wrote the lyrics for the song not me.