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parrish122
21-06-2003, 14:04
I take you to the beach at night
we wear just shadows and moonlight
Let's see what kind of magic we make.

You put togther what was torn apart
going deeper into my body, soul and heart
I want to do everything with you.

I feel and hear the waves crashing
both of the sea and our passion
we'll take this as far as it can go.

I smell the salt of the sea
as well as the love from you and me
you know, like water we flow.

Who knows where I end and you begin
and I don't care who calls this sin
because you sure feel like heaven to me.

To the ocean's music we add our own
I drink in every sigh and moan
and when the tide comes, so do you.

The sun will be up all too soon
so we say goodbye to the ocean and moon
but I'll carry this forever with me.

6/21/03
Parrish

abzdrakt
21-06-2003, 15:31
:) it's lovely...

The words flow nicely...

When I read it the second time this line just did it - it's perfect

'Let's see what kind of magic we make'

I love it...

What inspired this?

parrish122
21-06-2003, 16:18
*blush*

<Clears throat> Well, tomorrow is the ten year mark for my partner and I...so I was in a romantic frame of mind. :)

I'm glad you liked it!

Parrish

warx
21-06-2003, 16:52
WOW!!!

very smooth parrish... tnx for sharing it with us...
luv it...
like it...

sheerblade
21-06-2003, 16:55
Very nice parrish, I love it ^_^

Kappa
21-06-2003, 18:03
Congrats, parrish! :P

snowangel14
21-06-2003, 18:34
Wow!

It's fantastic! I totally lovve it! :done:

surferchickSD
21-06-2003, 21:18
wow that was great. i'm at the beach almost every day and it can be very romantic at night with the moon and all:love:

parrish122
21-06-2003, 23:31
<Big grin>

Thanks gang. It had been a while since I'd written a poem, so it's nice to know you all like it. :)

Parrish

Uhaku
22-06-2003, 01:52
i really, really, really like this one! ^_^

pacmangirl
22-06-2003, 07:22
That was very very awesome. I really loved the whole contrast with the ocean..
I second that conratulations :)

LMH7654
23-06-2003, 16:10
All I can say is, it simply took my breath away! **Blushing immensely**