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EeZeReal
03-06-2003, 14:52
Initially wrote to errrrm break my writers block about 30 mins ago..LoL..Thought I'd share it..

Systematic stress in retrospect, a fortnight plausible for death,
defenseless as the corridor stretched, left as the horrible reject.
Abondoned derelict, terror wrists leak lifestreams from razor swipes,
danger climbs top, as God jettisons manger cries while angels hide.
Fanals collide in the heat of the night, begin the divine wreckoning,
an ascertain blemishing as the times setting in to find Bethlehem.
Spines meriting beyond excellence, no remembering of whats cherishing,
not to mention the retention rots imaging the devil in heaven sins.
Peril in maven skins as rage within concucts in a moment of anguish,
im hopeless for handling from the very second im frozen from language.
Speech the token im gambling into this thrill, a wheel of misfortune,
I feel the missed forced to bet black or blue, the will of an orphan.
Im real to a portion of a human being greaving, tear drop seedlings,
that meal feeding the Earth, contrary to the curse of lost greetings.
Im pursed to not teaming for miscellaneous reasons, fake opinions,
built around my graced appearance, reverence raised straight intent of 'em.
A great sense of severance portraited through actions and optical liquid,
enraptured to optional spirits, as my friends locked me in real shit.
Friends lost within the realness, but being tangible was a ghost story,
Im disputing, executing words of reasoning till my mandible broke on me.
In this land of corrosion, all I see is affliction, depiction 1990's,
enrichen the lighting thats shining, its back to races fighting whiteys.
And mighty tyrants opressing ticks of the intellectually incessancy,
Erect the decibel cemetry and cease interesting sentences to breathe.
Having to rent these dreams, I fiend for pittance measly raking reason,
sake for leaving existence, my minds the only thing thats breaking even.
Jumping into lakes to stop breathing, forsaken in this life of patience,
Left in these shrouded occasions, I don't even own the right to waiting.
Im liked to hating, a nation embraced to keep me down faced, wasted,
clowns laced sniggering, haste to find riveting, my found race, traceless..

daydreamer0102
04-06-2003, 03:17
whoa, krazyness....i love it. u could make 3-4 songs with all that material :p