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I guess i hav too many sleepless nights. And this idea just kept popping up in my head. So bare with me as i try to keep my sanity. Anyway, I don't even hav a title for it yet. Just think of it as something to kill ur time. :D It's unedited. So read at ur own riskkkk ... ker! ...
Warning: If u already knew my writing style and don't like it, pls don't read to upset urself. And "HUH?!" is not the title of this story. :none:
Edit: This piece is not a fanfiction anymore. I still use the tatu pic for the website simply b/c it's pretty. Lol. Enjoy
http://www.uhaku.com/dw/dw_index.htm
Yulia_Fan
18-05-2003, 13:27
woah. *in shock* that was amazing! but, to be continued?! i am desperate to see how!
interesting way of using the girls, meaning the different ages etc. i hope u continue with this, i am intrigued to see what could possibly happen next!
PS: Yulia is simply adorable!!
yipeeeee, another fic...
tnx uhaku...
Wow...You know I love your writing, and this is definitely no different! :D
YLuelniaa
18-05-2003, 17:51
DAMN, that was just AMAzing.......i sure hope you continue this..
smilie faces
18-05-2003, 21:54
it was cool ... ! your writting is superb as usual
yet.. aw .. maaan.. tragedy again?
boo :(
I wanna know what happens next !
kishkash
18-05-2003, 23:46
WOW what can i say uhaku, u have such an excellent style of writing!
Your stories are like a drug for me! ;)
keep it up!! I don't care what you do to them!! jaja!! Kill them, make them love each other, torture us, cause it feels so good!! jaja
Amazing, great as usual Uhaku, thank you for this new fic
I'll just sit here waiting for next chapter...
pacmangirl
19-05-2003, 02:37
that was really awesome uhaku, very intriguing. I love how you write, it makes it really easy to make the pictures in my head... like a movie... anyways, very looking forward to what happens :yes: :done:
rh2k, just chill and wait for the next part. :)
No need to harangue uhaku about the story by just saying it's going to be depressing.
ripptyd: true ...very true
The only thing we DO know is that this fic kicks a$$ and i can tell just by the first part! :)
Arwen
Warning: If u already knew my writing style and don't like it, pls don't read to upset urself. And "HUH?!" is not the title of this story. :none:
I know your style and want to read more of your work because it's different. Don't care what you write; I just want to read it.
Great story! :done:
- SK.
rh2k, there's a million and one ways to write a chapter like that, just like in 666. We won't know until later if it's literal or not. So until then, just sit back and relax...
thank you, everybody! i'm quite surprised u guys like it regardless of what happened at the end of the first chapter. Hee Hee. this just proved i'm not alone in the wilderness.
Arwen, LOL! i'm glad u enjoyed the torturing. lol!
Ripp, it's always great to hear that u like my stuff. (((blushing)))
Mel, warx, i saw ur post in my guestbook. thanks! ^_^
it seems my warning didn't seem to do any good. maybe i should make it clearer at the start. like..."don't expect joyous feast from Uhaku. she's insane!"...-_-'
Originally posted by uhaku
Mel, warx, i saw ur post in my guestbook. thanks! ^_^
My pleasure! :D
"don't expect joyous feast from Uhaku. she's insane!"...-_-'
I like insane, just ask my friends... :heh:
- Mel.
parrish122
20-05-2003, 12:58
One good thing about my being offline for so long is I come back and find all this great stuff to read!
I like this, Uhaku. You keep us hooked because we *never* know what to expect.
Parrish
no prob uhaku...
its my honor to sign in ur guestbuk
chapter 2-3 are up. :eek: :spy: (unedited)
Yulia_Fan
22-05-2003, 15:43
wow...
that was.. weird! but fantastic! i am fasncinated, looking forward to the next chapter :)
tnx for the new chaps.....
YLuelniaa
22-05-2003, 17:17
HOLY NUTCRACKER...that was just amazingly fantastic..
I mean shesh where do you come up with these concepts..
kishkash
22-05-2003, 19:12
U are amazingly unbelieve!! HOW DO U DO IT!!! Another masterpiese ;)
Originally posted by rh2k
That was scary. Lena's body falling appart?
dude, somehow, i could never scare u away.
Edit: i was being harsh. forgive my frustration. but still...If that's all you see, and it makes you ill, don't read.
daydreamer0102
23-05-2003, 03:29
haha damn this story is a trip!! i like it :) :done:
dare2dream28
27-05-2003, 03:54
*blinks* Wow. That's just...wow. uhaku, you have such a unique writing style...it's very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter!
chapter 4 is up. unedited. :dead:
skrtfntcwu
31-05-2003, 21:39
Originally posted by rh2k
It's not scary, it's sickening. (in a sad way)
what do u exactly mean, rh2k?
becuase if u mean that that the author is, by any way, sick and sad, then you're the one who might be sick.UR always ripping others apart with your unconstructive critisism, so perhaps u should check urself before cowardly spewing comments that are neither helpful, NOR friendly. But that's just my opinion.
other than that, uhaku i must commend you for yet another amazing fic that i'm sure will have us all wondering 'what else has she got up her sleeves..?' :)
-skrt
You. Rowr. Tsk. :P
*holds up an I -heart- skrtfntcwu banner*
Nicely said. :D
I must 2nd it to death.
The fact the uncalled for comments get on my nerves as well as a few other members really makes me wonder how well uhaku is holding up. I bet she's feeling like throttling someone. Hell, I am. :D
YLuelniaa
01-06-2003, 21:54
wow...that was a sad chapter...poor girly
sorry, just to let u all know, i will not update this story until i finish 666, which i hope ... soon. well, not really, i'd be sad when i'm done with that story...((((sighssss))))
pacmangirl
07-06-2003, 04:33
Seriously, if I keep reading this I'll end up with no nails.... eek.
Oh well, it's worth it :D
http://www.uhaku.com/fanfics/Fanfic_index.htm
It's been a long time since I last updated. But now, Chapter 5 is up. Feel free to scan through the first four to refresh ur memory. ^_^
Oh, just to let you know, none of the chapters are edited. So, i apologize in advance, i know there must be lots of mistakes. Ah, anyway ...
Originally posted by uhaku
It's been a long time since I last updated. But now, Chapter 5 is up. Feel free to scan through the first four to refresh ur memory. ^_^
Don't need to; I remember it pretty well... ;)
Weeee! An update... :done:
- sk.
showMElove2
16-09-2003, 14:06
;) Howls in excitement!! Now I have to run off and read.....
parrish122
16-09-2003, 14:23
Yay! I've been hoping you'd get back to this one!
I'm *very* hooked now.
Parrish
*very* good!! your an awsome writer!
Thanks, guys!
Chapter 6 is up. I apologize for the spelling and grammar mistakes (I know they're there somewhere!). Just hope it's not too funny. Emm...
Originally posted by uhaku
Just hope it's not too funny. Emm...
It was just fine to me; short but fine. But, all of the sudden I wondered exactly how old Yulia is... :dknow:
- sk.
Lol, S.K., umm...at the moment, she's more or less an 8 year-old girl. ^_^
showMElove2
21-09-2003, 06:15
I am trying to put together the pieces to this story and failing miserably, however I am very intrigued and I know that with your writing, it will all come together. I have some ideas as to what is going on but I don't wanna speculate so I will wait for the updates!
prostrel
21-09-2003, 13:14
I "fell off the carriage" already when I was reading chapter 1 and I still haven`t been able to catch the carriage again but I keep on trying. Maybe, some day, I`ll succeed and "all comes together" as showMElove2 said. We`ll see, we`ll see... :none:
The site has been down. So i didn't get to post. chapter 8 was up.
I do hope it all comes together, too. lol
Originally posted by uhaku
Lol, S.K., umm...at the moment, she's more or less an 8 year-old girl. ^_^
Aaaaaw! That's soooo cute! LOL!
- sk.
oooh! interesting turn of events there - i was wondering where this was all leading too. it's very very interesting, can't wait to read more of it! :)
showMElove2
24-09-2003, 13:56
See, I knew it would all come together, and it is, Im still unsure about some things like (the age difference) but I can't wait to read what you have in store for us with this fic! Its so suspenseful and I'm loving it:done:
prostrel
24-09-2003, 15:24
I am still more or less lost but I`m eagerly waiting the future connectiong with little Julia and Lena (or should I say Ayn). Thrilling fic, yes indeed.
http://www.uhaku.com/dw/dw_index.htm
This is the new address to this Fiction piece. Last chapter updated is 12. I've changed many things in this story, so for the older readers, feel free to skim thru it again. Enjoy. ^_^'
angeljas01
27-01-2004, 08:41
I'm absolutley loving this fic! The last chapter was ahhhh! I wonder what's gonna happen to Jaden now, you always leave me at the edge of my seat. Thanks Uhaku.
Volkster
11-06-2005, 15:10
Hehe! I know I already told you this at the opther thread but since I found this one I might as well say it again so that you know how much I want you to update this! :D
PLEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE!!!!! ;)
Veggie Delite
18-06-2005, 21:24
yes pleeeeeease update
God.. I want to read this story but the link is not working anymore.. Could someone please email it to me? Please.. :) I've heard you're also the writer of "666" and I just ordered that book, have never read it, but my best friend told me it was a "must read" :p So I decided I wanted to read more of your stories.. :) So.. Could someone please send it to me? Thnx!
dare2dream28
05-10-2006, 04:58
Mannnnnn, I *just* looked up this thread two days ago and boy was I surprised to see someone else was thinking of it too! If anyone saved Uhaku's chapters of DW, could they please send me a PM so I can give you my e-mail? I'd LOVE to re-read this story again, even if it is unfinished. This was an AWESOME story!
Khartoun2004
05-10-2006, 05:41
Mannnnnn, I *just* looked up this thread two days ago and boy was I surprised to see someone else was thinking of it too! If anyone saved Uhaku's chapters of DW, could they please send me a PM so I can give you my e-mail? I'd LOVE to re-read this story again, even if it is unfinished. This was an AWESOME story!
I think she's turning it into a book actually. I know she turned 666 into a novel. Are the links dead?
Yes the links are dead, and I know 666 is a book, I ordered it and I should get it this weekend *hopes*.. But another book? :D Awesome!
Khartoun2004
05-10-2006, 07:49
I found the thread on the tatu.us Forum (yes I know it's blasphamy, but :dknow: Oh well :p) Darkness Within (http://www.tatu.us/forum/viewtopic.php?t=7532&postdays=0&postorder=asc&highlight=Darkness+within&start=0)... I believe most of it has been reposted.
Yes but the link she gives there ( http://www.uhaku.com/dw/dw_index.htm ) is dead.. She did post some chapters in that thread, but not all of them.. So it's not really making sense :p
Khartoun2004
05-10-2006, 07:55
Yes but the link she gives there ( http://www.uhaku.com/dw/dw_index.htm ) is dead..
It's not the link. The story was reposted in the actually thread as posts. just go through it you'll find it.
Yeah i did, but it starts with chapter 17 or something, up till 23.. So I still miss the first 16 chapters then..
Khartoun2004
05-10-2006, 08:09
Yeah i did, but it starts with chapter 17 or something, up till 23.. So I still miss the first 16 chapters then..
Oh Sorry. I didn't check the whole thread. I might have some of the chapters on my old desktop. I'll check tomorrow when I'm actually home, but I can't promise anything. I have no idea what I have saved on it.
Still thanks for trying! :) :rose:
dare2dream28
05-10-2006, 21:57
Yes, Khartoun2004, thank you for looking! That would be flipping GREAT if she turned that into a book! I bought 666 awhile ago so I'd be more than happy to buy DW. :D
Khartoun2004
06-10-2006, 16:16
I found a link for a poster advertising the new book Darkness Within. (http://xs.to/xs.php?h=xs30&d=05214&f=DW_Poster2.jpg) I don't know how recent this is though. I'm searching the Borders web page now to see if I can find any results.
dare2dream28
07-10-2006, 00:22
I PMed uhaku over at tatu.us. She is in fact working on a DW novel so unfortunately she can't let us read the old version anymore since she's revamping it before she sends it to see if someone will publish it. Hopefully though we won't have to wait too long until we can buy it online!!!!!
Awesome! "666" arrived yesterday and I love it :D So this is just wonderful cuz I love her writing style or whatever you call it :heart:
Khartoun2004
08-10-2006, 05:59
I PMed uhaku over at tatu.us. She is in fact working on a DW novel so unfortunately she can't let us read the old version anymore since she's revamping it before she sends it to see if someone will publish it. Hopefully though we won't have to wait too long until we can buy it online!!!!!
That's awesome for her. Unfortunately guys it looks like I deleted most of the tatu fanfics I had on my old computer, sorry, I tried. :bum:
It's okay.. But she's working on turning Darkness Within into a novel, and 666 is already a novel.. Does anyone know if The Irish will be a novel too? :) I love that story too..
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