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Ripptyd
24-04-2003, 04:04
The writer, who of course, being their stubborn self, doesn't want to be known for this so-called mush. I find it extremelly beautiful and urged them to continue on it. I said that it would be well recieved, and they basically said to prove it.

This isn't Tatu related and isn't meant to be if continued further on.

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And she reached for my lips with her fingertips, sliding dreams across my mouth. She whispered words for the wind to catch as she stepped closer. I strained to hear, but even our closeness would not allow for it. Eye to eye, I could feel her breath linger on my flesh. Heart to heart, I could feel her need steal my thoughts away.

I tried to speak against her touch, though she only smiled in return, gaze sliding from my own to find enchantment in the movement of my lips. It seemed such a wonder to her, such a joy that she could sense me in this way. I wanted to tell her I felt the same, but my lungs had failed me; nothing would come from my forgotten voice.

Replacing her hand with her mouth, she stole what breath I had left. It was a languid kiss, and yet so brief, my mind spun in confused bliss. Her cheek caressed my own as her lips brushed against my ear. "Be mine."

YLuelniaa
24-04-2003, 04:11
WOW...that was wow....Just wow...i love the details of it...

this person so should continue

Dees
24-04-2003, 04:13
Yea....... continue ........... sounds good!

bgirlnikki
24-04-2003, 05:07
I want some of whatever the person who worte this is smoking!

Continue! Dang, I felt lost!

daydreamer0102
24-04-2003, 05:10
hell i enjoyed it...go on with the story :)

parrish122
24-04-2003, 05:52
By all means, she should continue!

Listen to Ripp---she knows what she's talking about!

Parrish

rivierakid
24-04-2003, 14:31
man...that was just...wow...

hmmm...should she countinue?

ABSO-FREAKING-LUTLY!

prostrel
24-04-2003, 15:25
Be so kind, continue!

Switchup
24-04-2003, 15:31
Yes, please do continue. This person obviously has quite a bit of writing talent, it would be interesting to see where this is going.

Stop it!
24-04-2003, 19:36
Continue! I felt like I was in a daze while reading that! Link?

pacmangirl
24-04-2003, 23:48
very emotion-packed.. i loved it.. i think i'll still be thinking about it when i go to sleep.. wow... melted my heart... by all means, continue! :yes:

skrtfntcwu
25-04-2003, 02:05
*cough* *cough*

now listen YOU!

u MUST continue this.

for i know where u live, doc!


love and support as always,
-skrt