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Echoed
07-03-2003, 03:23
Sometimes, I wish there was more to me than this odd little smile that I see.



"J'ai demandй а la lune,
Si tu voulais encore de moi...
Elle m'a dit: « J'ai pas l'habitude
De m'occuper des cas comme зa. »
Et toi et moi, on йtait tellement sыr...
Et on se disait quelques fois
Que c'йtait juste une aventure,
Et que зa ne durerait pas..."

Mais non, tu ne me manques pas.

I remember the day we said
That, no, we had not ever bled.
And you took my hand for a while,
So we could walk for just a mile.

And you promised me that blue star,
If we would not journey too far.
But we had tasted all the rain
And now, I could touch all your pain.

Et regardez bien, lа-haut.
Voyez-vous le ciel si beau?

Hai...
So ka.

Juste quelques mots а te dire.
Juste pour ton petit sourire.
Mais, je me rappelle bien.
Mon coeur bleu йtait le sien.

"Omnia mutantur, nos et mutamur in illis."

On s'est laissй.
On s'est blessй.

How anomalous
Life doth be for us...

No, no te quiero.
Te necesito.

Mа, anh cу yкu em khфng?
Mа, anh cтn yкu em khфng?

[If] only to crave.
Crave for anything.



Around the corner, around the bend, I'll sit to wait for another end.


***

Written on the 9th of July, 2002. I had been incredibly bored. ^_^' Anything in this color is from the song "J'ai demandй а la lune" by Indochine. This looks better in it's original form, but being that you can't html here... ^_^' Oh well. Not missing out on much anyway. I don't even remember why I'm posting this. Oh yes... I'm procrastinating. This is nowhere as good as what other writers here can do, but... hey. The worst that can happen is that people find this really crappy. Lol. In which case, I'm alright with that, because I think it stinks too. :P Har, har. (For anyone who's curious, I used six languages in this. Yay! Workin' dem meninges, I am.)

~Echo/Noct.

forre
07-03-2003, 03:39
Wow! That was multiligual. ThanksEchoed!
Very sweet!

O-R-!-G-I-N
07-03-2003, 03:53
Nice shades of blue :p
Cool stuff, nice way to burn your boredom.

Angel_of_life
09-03-2003, 00:21
u know... i couldn't read it normaly b/c of different colors and sizes... :(
and i've read only english words... i need to day that the words wich sounds together r 2 poor :(

Echoed
09-03-2003, 06:26
Well, there are six languages in this piece and it was meant to be hard to read with all the colors and fonts. Lol. And I wrote it a while ago, but I'll work on the rhymes if they are too weak. ^_^ Thank you for your input, very appreciated. :)

~Echo.

Angel_of_life
10-03-2003, 22:44
Echoed, oh! really? it was thought to be like that? wow... so u have good imagination %)
and if what... just find interesting rhyme... something unusual... and it will sound in another way... %) it will be richer...