Again, Rain.

[Ranko]

Blue diamond, sewing the night,
silver shadow, closing tight,
a crucifix under a red light;
the crimson moon, it's grey might,
they truth relative, yet bright,
dreams do not seem right;
drowned indifference, broken fight,
spilled secrets, lonely fright,
a heartbeat with bad sight.

What's your concept of straight,
silent plight?

And I no longer know ...
... what to think anymore.

So ab-used, so miss-used.
So confused ..............
Used to, you set to.
You Said Two ...




(Written on 02/22/2003)


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When did life become a game of chess ...

[goku]

Wonderful!

silver shadow, closing tight,
a crucifix under a red light;

Beautiful words... :D

[Echoed]

You said.
I bled.
In your head.
In my bed.

Mahaha.

Ahem. I loved it.

~Echo.

[Angel_of_life]

nice... the 1-st part is wonderful %)
spilled secrets, lonely fright,
a heartbeat with bad sight.
i liked these words...

[Ranko]

Thanks alot for your feedback! ^_^ I've never really written before, and english is a second tongue to me, so i'm really glad you liked it! :D